How does one prevent this? I struggle sentence to sentence to try to not sound so stupid.
I feel like it's all a bunch of "she made a pot of coffee. She turned on the radio. She felt sad."
I'm doing textbook WRONG things consistently. Telling not showing. No description. Characters lacking their own voices.
I need practice. Ok, off to crank out some more crap. :)
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